In the article " Philadelphia superintendent identifies schools he intends to close," by Kristen A. Graham, they talk about how the Philadelphia school district, superintendent William R. Hite wants to make the largest reduction in the history of Philadelphia school district by shutting down six city schools and relocate, closing programs, or reshuffle grades at many more.
"This is a historic moment for us," Hite said at news conference. Overall there will be twenty-two elementary schools, four middle, and eleven high schools. But the changes will only be made if Hite's recommendations are accepted by the School Reform Commission, which will happen later in March.
In my opinion I think that if the School Reform Commission agrees to Hite's recommendations the city of Philadelphia well have a lot of problems with students in school. For an instant violence can be a problem, because a lot of students from different school may not get along with each other and that may cause problems throughout the school with drama. Another problem can be the students academic levels, not every student are on the same level as the other students from different schools.
Did this article make you wonder about anything? What if this happens to your school next how would you feel? If it was to happen how you would adjust to a new school, new surroundings, and new environment? Do you think that Parkway would ever be in a situation like this?
You do a good job until the last paragraph. When you ask questions, they should be questions that you yourself would like to get answers to. The questions should not be addressed to your readers. The way you write these just makes it look like you are trying to get the post over and done with. 75
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